I've had a topic page and two comics featured, but here's the second actual feature article I've written for them!
[link]They changed a lot less in this one than they did in my first one, but their editorial process created the glaring mistake of calling a spider an insect.
I have to admit all my favorite jokes in this one are theirs. They doubled the amount of humor. When I submitted it, the intro stories were more deadpan horror with only one or two jokes apiece. I love what they did with them.
I also just had to say that the line:
"You couldn't have a worse sexual experience if you went down on C'thulu against a dumpster in the alleyway behind a crackhouse."
is my new favourite thing I've ever heard. I was practically in hysterics when I read it. xD
A couple of mistakes, though. At one point you (or the editor) refer to a portia spider as an insect. And the sarlacc didn't eat Boba Fett at the end of Return of the Jedi, it happened about 20 minutes into a 135 minute film.
The sarlacc always reminded me of an ant lion more than anything.
that was awesome!!
Thanks sooooooooo much for the link!
Although I never knew New Zealand had anything cool about it...
Great work, as always.
Good show!